I have written a few fairy tales. I blame Disney. They create these films which kind of lend themselves to the fantasy world of spanking. Since Princesses have gained more attitude and independence, it just means the Prince has to work harder.
This snippet is from Rapunzel’s Hairbrush. Prince Charming has just climbed up the enormous tower and things are not going as he expected when faced with a rather difficult Rapunzel.
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“I climbed up these grim walls for you and you can leave any time!”
“Naturally, good grief, you don’t suppose somebody could live up here all alone with no friends. I have to shop for food and clothes and meet my friends.”
“Friends!” He was becoming increasingly exasperated.
“Cinderella, Sleeping Beauty – well napping beauty we call her and not forgetting Snow White. It’s very tedious lying in a glass coffin waiting for you to turn up.”
“I’ve been busy. I spent a few years stuck as a beast, then a frog and finding this bloody tower for you. I can’t believe you’ve been sat about doing nothing.”
“What’s the point of a good rescue if you’re not here to be rescued. You’re not much of a Prince Charming are you? Prince ‘I can’t be bothered’ would sum you up. It’s hard work sitting around here, looking at the sky, talking to the birds and dealing with wicked step-mothers.” She started to pull on a shoe.
“Oh no, you’re not going anywhere young lady. It’s time you were taught a lesson,” said Prince Charming.
To read the full story – click HERE
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Jaye Peaches - Author 
This is lovely! I’ve long wanted to see Rapunzel get it. 🙂
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Posted by Anastasia Vitsky | January 18, 2014, 11:49She was at the top of my list for disney princesses needing a good spanking 🙂
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:37Oh I love this Jaye! Great, fun story and a wonderful twist on the fairy tale 🙂
Hugs,
Roz
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Posted by Roz | January 18, 2014, 12:48Thanks Roz.
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:37Well, what’s a prince supposed to do? She could at least try to sound grateful
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Posted by annesherriff | January 18, 2014, 12:52Indeed. After a good spanking, I’m sure she was 🙂
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:38Someone truly needs her tail busted. Hope he’s man enough for the job!
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Posted by PK Corey | January 18, 2014, 14:30He’s a well trained prince 🙂
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:38Cute Jaye! 🙂
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Posted by Natasha Knight | January 18, 2014, 15:11Thanks Natasha
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:38I like your fairy tales better. LOL
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Posted by Leigh Smith | January 18, 2014, 16:17Thanks, Leigh, but I don’t think they will be made into films 🙂
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:39Hmm I love her mouth…lol
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Posted by Suzy Ayers | January 18, 2014, 16:43She does let it get carried away – then there are the consequences 🙂
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:40An intriguing take on the original tale. Love it. Let’s see her get her just desserts 🙂
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Posted by Abigail Armani | January 18, 2014, 17:18I’ve always thought she should make some effort to get out of that tower. Clearly she likes it up there 🙂
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:41LOL, I love it that he climbed up this enormous tower just to get attitude. LOL NIce!! It’s great when the heroine agitates the hero:) Good job!
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Posted by Mary Wehr | January 18, 2014, 19:57I do feel sorry for the prince. At least he didn’t get hit over the head with a frying pan like in Tangled. That would definitely have gotten her into more trouble.
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:42The prince who can’t be bothered. Oh she is feisty! This sounds like a delightfully fun read.
Awesome snippet Jaye!
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Posted by LA Cloutier | January 18, 2014, 20:10Do I secretly like her being feisty? maybe 🙂
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:43Such sass! You’re unique- I like it!
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Posted by Patty Devlin | January 18, 2014, 22:46Thanks Patty 🙂
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:44I loved this Jaye! Such fun! 🙂
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Posted by constance masters | January 18, 2014, 23:08It was fun to write – came very naturally given the original story.
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:44Love it. Very creative, and I imagine her hairbrush packs a punch.
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Posted by Jolynn Raymond | January 19, 2014, 17:59I picture it being quite large in shape 🙂
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:44Of course you have to spank Rapunzel with a wooden spoon!!! Love it!
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Posted by Renee Rose | January 20, 2014, 05:46Gah. I meant HAIRBRUSH. Sorry, I need to be spanked with something!
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Posted by Renee Rose | January 20, 2014, 05:47LOL…. I’m sure you can wrangle one somehow 🙂
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 20, 2014, 12:45I love fractured fairy tales, and having the Prince (he’s always named Charming, isn’t he) use her hairbrush for a little long-needed discipline is perfect. I love his exasperation thinking he was rescuing a damsel in distress, only to discover she can leave anytime he wants. Yup. Nothing like a little pissed-off prince to get the blood flowing into the nether regions of a lady’s body. Great snippet, Jaye. I loved her sauciness.
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Posted by Kathryn R. Blake | January 20, 2014, 22:04I liked the idea of a hardworking prince who discovers the princess could escape any time. gave her the opportunity to be a little bit sassy 🙂
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 25, 2014, 10:31hehe she needs a spanking ! love it
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Posted by Joelle Casteel | January 21, 2014, 20:05Definitely 🙂
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Posted by Jaye Peaches | January 25, 2014, 10:31